What do you need to revise

First and foremost, I think the scripts overall of the play is not easy to understand. In order to fix this, I am going to modify my scripts by adding more information on characters' motivations for everything they are going to do. It has several advantages. It enriches the story and helps the blocking. Since audiences are not the author, they would not easily comprehend the story with vague languages and expressions so I would add more lines that explain the reason for most actions. On performance, emotions in different situations should be distinct, since they should not be identical, that help audiences to fully understand what is happening. To use a wide and big stage, we should have movements to fill the whole stage. The play contains mainly two scenes, which fortunately split the whole stage into two. In my play, two characters have relatively fewer interactions, but they have similarities in some way so two stages would probably enhance the sense of similarities. Audiences may find resonance from two sides of the stage when different characters come to the stage. Music, including background music, has a significant status in the play. When I add sad or down music on each scene, it decorates the atmosphere of the whole play. Since my play contains babies, it also contains babies' crying and laughing sound on certain occupations. Babies' sound is a response, since there are four separate scenes which are monologues. Babies' sound alternately plays the role of another character and fills the blank left by a solo play. In the end, I want to add more lines between two characters, while the ending can still be filled with more actions and changing of emotions that enhance the atmosphere to the climax. From monologues to the ending, it is not only a scene change but also a change from inside the room to the society, an enviornment change. If it is such a big changing, it should be more dramatic.