In Class Writing 4/12
"I have eaten the plums" is the first two lines in the first stanza. It should be expressing a sound of eating but the sound is eliminated by the term "ice box" in the next two lines. An ice box doesn't fit people's appetite mostly, so the sound of eating is eliminated by the reader himself. Obviously, the first stanza doesn't supply any context, yet the next two lines probably sound really painful because the food is taken away. So far, it sounds really sad when the reader reads it, since the third stanza is all about the guilt.
I see the plums are stored in a big block of ice. Hands take the plums from the ice easily, without any difficulties. Finally, the hands are staying at the corner of the room, the plums are crushed on hands.
The story behind is a person who couldn't control himself so that he takes the plums whatever in any condition. Even though he enjoys the foods, he is still feeling guilty about that.
I see the plums are stored in a big block of ice. Hands take the plums from the ice easily, without any difficulties. Finally, the hands are staying at the corner of the room, the plums are crushed on hands.
The story behind is a person who couldn't control himself so that he takes the plums whatever in any condition. Even though he enjoys the foods, he is still feeling guilty about that.
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